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Comfort Blankets my mind For the warmth of a lover So perfect our naked embrace We fell in simultaneous release As our breath begins to steady As heart rates slow to creep Almost asleep Comfort
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Oct 10, 2013
Oct 10, 2013 at 12:55 AM UTC
Comfort (Rictameter)
Comfort Blankets my mind For the warmth of a lover So perfect our naked embrace We fell in simultaneous release As our breath begins to steady As heart rates slow to creep Almost asleep Comfort
Rictameter - a nine line poem, with no rhyme scheme, but a syllable count of 2-4-6-8-10-8-6-4-2
lawrence-abbott
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Oct 10, 2013
Oct 10, 2013 at 12:55 AM UTC
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