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I stare into the water and see my reflection But where does he see all the perfection. What does he see? What does his eyes marvel at when mine close at everything? He stares into the water not knowing that he is perfect Wonders if he is worth it Telling me to find someone who is worth it But he was and still is worth it The other stares not knowing that he is at sight to behold. He sees the imperfections like a critic would see a piece of art Ignoring the paint that was placed with such a delicate hand and focusing on the wrong crooked incorrect lines. Who else needs to take a walk on the decK
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Oct 8, 2013
Oct 8, 2013 at 8:47 PM UTC
On the Deck (For Ilion gray)
I stare into the water and see my reflection But where does he see all the perfection. What does he see? What does his eyes marvel at when mine close at everything? He stares into the water not knowing that he is perfect Wonders if he is worth it Telling me to find someone who is worth it But he was and still is worth it The other stares not knowing that he is at sight to behold. He sees the imperfections like a critic would see a piece of art Ignoring the paint that was placed with such a delicate hand and focusing on the wrong crooked incorrect lines. Who else needs to take a walk on the decK
Ilion gray, I tired so here what I got might try again with another photo
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28/Cisgender Male/American
Oct 8, 2013
Oct 8, 2013 at 8:47 PM UTC
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