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the five fighters push past at a slow run their sweating form a unified theory of motion their thoughts a universe of devotions to the craft of defeat and victory's they move with concentration through the steady persistence of rain as a single organism of denials of the ability to surrender to the dull life as they push past you pacing the wet pavement with careworn step you can feel the cheering crowd you can sense the elation of the upraised fist of championship and the eyes of the world upon as they push past you sense what it means to be undefeated undefeatable five fighters at a slow run in the steady uncaring rain and as they push past your broken wheelbarrow existence they reach out from within to share their strength for the greatest champion knows the strength of frailty
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Oct 8, 2013
Oct 8, 2013 at 12:31 PM UTC
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the five fighters push past at a slow run their sweating form a unified theory of motion their thoughts a universe of devotions to the craft of defeat and victory's they move with concentration through the steady persistence of rain as a single organism of denials of the ability to surrender to the dull life as they push past you pacing the wet pavement with careworn step you can feel the cheering crowd you can sense the elation of the upraised fist of championship and the eyes of the world upon as they push past you sense what it means to be undefeated undefeatable five fighters at a slow run in the steady uncaring rain and as they push past your broken wheelbarrow existence they reach out from within to share their strength for the greatest champion knows the strength of frailty
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Oct 8, 2013
Oct 8, 2013 at 12:31 PM UTC
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