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“**Tis in ourselves that we are thus or thus. Our bodies are our gardens, to which our wills are gardeners…”       – Iago, Act 1, Scene 3 in Shakespeare's "Othello**” *A commandment to wellness, spoke aloud, with resolute foursquare, of which no doubt, upon whom the responsibility lays, each of us poets individually I am not a gardner, know not the pleasure of rich dark soil loam, cupped in my hand, or the stroking of first blooms, the genteel of  spring, afternoon delights for the eyes, but for me, no elemental quivering no instinct bids me dig, plant, water and worry…* but my body’s garden another matter for pillaging insects, the bollwevil and other assorted devils planted internally and infernally breeding the ills of human failings, with tulip yellow couragelessness, they infiltrate & exploit the crevices where our fallacies buried but unearthed what is this longevity word? we've live as long as intended, forces internal, weathered by outside forces, gales amazing and pelting storms within and without combative born from earth’s produce, we tend our own garden unequally, inconsistently   though gardens demand, preferring constantly li loving attentions *but humans are notoriously of poor attention spans and we tend to tend in spurs of moments, some lasting decades and thus or thus, a poor epitaph to our fallow falling fallen humanity*
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Jun 16, 2024
Jun 16, 2024 at 8:17 AM UTC
the garden of longevity, we are thus or thus...
“**Tis in ourselves that we are thus or thus. Our bodies are our gardens, to which our wills are gardeners…”       – Iago, Act 1, Scene 3 in Shakespeare's "Othello**” *A commandment to wellness, spoke aloud, with resolute foursquare, of which no doubt, upon whom the responsibility lays, each of us poets individually I am not a gardner, know not the pleasure of rich dark soil loam, cupped in my hand, or the stroking of first blooms, the genteel of  spring, afternoon delights for the eyes, but for me, no elemental quivering no instinct bids me dig, plant, water and worry…* but my body’s garden another matter for pillaging insects, the bollwevil and other assorted devils planted internally and infernally breeding the ills of human failings, with tulip yellow couragelessness, they infiltrate & exploit the crevices where our fallacies buried but unearthed what is this longevity word? we've live as long as intended, forces internal, weathered by outside forces, gales amazing and pelting storms within and without combative born from earth’s produce, we tend our own garden unequally, inconsistently   though gardens demand, preferring constantly li loving attentions *but humans are notoriously of poor attention spans and we tend to tend in spurs of moments, some lasting decades and thus or thus, a poor epitaph to our fallow falling fallen humanity*
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Jun 16, 2024
Jun 16, 2024 at 8:17 AM UTC
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