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I loved the absence of tobacco smoke Until I realized it meant he was gone. I loved the fresh breeze coming in through my window, Until I realized it meant he was not behind the window smoking away. It seems as if I loved the world when he was gone, but there was nothing more I wanted than being submerged in his love, tobacco smell and all.
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Feb 14, 2024
Feb 14, 2024 at 6:48 AM UTC
Tobacco, love and hate
I loved the absence of tobacco smoke Until I realized it meant he was gone. I loved the fresh breeze coming in through my window, Until I realized it meant he was not behind the window smoking away. It seems as if I loved the world when he was gone, but there was nothing more I wanted than being submerged in his love, tobacco smell and all.
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Feb 14, 2024
Feb 14, 2024 at 6:48 AM UTC
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