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Do you remember that time? My family has a home video of it. It was my birthday, and we were little kids, and there's this moment in it where we are standing quietly - Staring at each other Awkwardly. You smile and giggle, and I smile too, but only a little, because I'm trying to be still. When I see it, it's like walking into a time portal. I remember what I'd said to you. I remember how I'd felt: Like everything was moving too fast, so I asked you for some help. I said, "Just stand here a minute. Don't move. Let's just stand here for a second." And you did. And there it is! Us standing awkwardly right in the midst of chaotic childhood revelry -but removed from it. We're like two young souls frozen forever in a moment that made no sense, and when I see it, I long for that first loss of innocence.
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Oct 6, 2013
Oct 6, 2013 at 1:43 AM UTC
Happy Birthday
Do you remember that time? My family has a home video of it. It was my birthday, and we were little kids, and there's this moment in it where we are standing quietly - Staring at each other Awkwardly. You smile and giggle, and I smile too, but only a little, because I'm trying to be still. When I see it, it's like walking into a time portal. I remember what I'd said to you. I remember how I'd felt: Like everything was moving too fast, so I asked you for some help. I said, "Just stand here a minute. Don't move. Let's just stand here for a second." And you did. And there it is! Us standing awkwardly right in the midst of chaotic childhood revelry -but removed from it. We're like two young souls frozen forever in a moment that made no sense, and when I see it, I long for that first loss of innocence.
And I miss you
JDK
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37/M/American
Oct 6, 2013
Oct 6, 2013 at 1:43 AM UTC
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