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You have no idea the irk Created by those terms, The judgement inherent in Laying out my perceived weakness Is offensive, All the more when weakness Neither becomes me nor is Found within me It makes the obvious response Rise to my lips, To cease to reach out In love or in help, To prove to you my worth by Withdrawing the very demonstration That led to the accusation at hand But with withdrawal of Reaching out comes Withdrawal of part of me, Part of my expressed love, And therein lies the rub, For if I share not how I feel or that Sharing is unaccepted, Then where is the actual point? Of us?
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Dec 12, 2023
Dec 12, 2023 at 7:26 AM UTC
Neediness Insecurity
You have no idea the irk Created by those terms, The judgement inherent in Laying out my perceived weakness Is offensive, All the more when weakness Neither becomes me nor is Found within me It makes the obvious response Rise to my lips, To cease to reach out In love or in help, To prove to you my worth by Withdrawing the very demonstration That led to the accusation at hand But with withdrawal of Reaching out comes Withdrawal of part of me, Part of my expressed love, And therein lies the rub, For if I share not how I feel or that Sharing is unaccepted, Then where is the actual point? Of us?
jamesb
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58/M/London
Dec 12, 2023
Dec 12, 2023 at 7:26 AM UTC
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