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i walkin down da street a man jump out da alleyway and stab dat der man inna chest wit a ice pick! dat man den run away! dat der man....fall down! da crowd come der "why dat man lyin down so?" dey ask (no-one unnerstans!) den dat man come back! says...."it's cause a da ice pick in his chest he lie dere!" an he reached down an yank dat ice pick outa da man's chest! "hurray, hurray!" da crowd cheer but dat der man he no get up!!! "ungrateful ******* so da crowd start kickin dat der man! whille dat other man walk away to the cheers a da crowd! now what i think is dis dat it weren't JES da ice pick why he lie dere!!!! i think da ice pick DONE somethin to dat dere man!!! SAY, WHAT DA YOU THINK?
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Jul 26, 2010
Jul 26, 2010 at 2:34 PM UTC
da man an da ice pick
i walkin down da street a man jump out da alleyway and stab dat der man inna chest wit a ice pick! dat man den run away! dat der man....fall down! da crowd come der "why dat man lyin down so?" dey ask (no-one unnerstans!) den dat man come back! says...."it's cause a da ice pick in his chest he lie dere!" an he reached down an yank dat ice pick outa da man's chest! "hurray, hurray!" da crowd cheer but dat der man he no get up!!! "ungrateful ******* so da crowd start kickin dat der man! whille dat other man walk away to the cheers a da crowd! now what i think is dis dat it weren't JES da ice pick why he lie dere!!!! i think da ice pick DONE somethin to dat dere man!!! SAY, WHAT DA YOU THINK?
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jeffrey-robin
Jul 26, 2010
Jul 26, 2010 at 2:34 PM UTC
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