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R.I.P. tatoo Just below the right knee one more down in the concrete jungle. chalk line washed fading in the night wind. Yellow tape flutters in the breeze.like break away kites caught up  in the trees. Rat a tat tat. brings rat a tat tat. Young mother wailing on buckled knees. Firing line drawn in blues and reds claiming turf with a bandanna head. Rat a tat tat brings rat a  tat tat. Head stones  lined up. waiting for the dead R.I P. in faded ink. Live by the sword hey what did you think. Rat a tat tat bring rat a pay back. Cactus flower sprouts around thorns Beauty nestled in blood red sun. Live by the gun and die by the gun Rat a tat tat. Brings rat a tat tat. right down to the ground. the ground. The dust.
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Oct 3, 2013
Oct 3, 2013 at 8:19 PM UTC
Cactus Flower with a rat a tat tat
R.I.P. tatoo Just below the right knee one more down in the concrete jungle. chalk line washed fading in the night wind. Yellow tape flutters in the breeze.like break away kites caught up  in the trees. Rat a tat tat. brings rat a tat tat. Young mother wailing on buckled knees. Firing line drawn in blues and reds claiming turf with a bandanna head. Rat a tat tat brings rat a  tat tat. Head stones  lined up. waiting for the dead R.I P. in faded ink. Live by the sword hey what did you think. Rat a tat tat bring rat a pay back. Cactus flower sprouts around thorns Beauty nestled in blood red sun. Live by the gun and die by the gun Rat a tat tat. Brings rat a tat tat. right down to the ground. the ground. The dust.
a conversation with a mother of three. widowed by Bang violence inspired this one.
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Oct 3, 2013
Oct 3, 2013 at 8:19 PM UTC
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