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My body was there, but not the soul within, I felt something strange, a battle to begin. Unfamiliar feelings, emotions untamed, Lost in a world where I couldn't be named. I moved and spoke, but the words felt astray, As if I were dancing to a tune I couldn't play. My body, a vessel, devoid of the core, A silent, empty vessel, craving something more. In the silence of that moment, I yearned to be whole, To reunite with my soul, to fill the gaping hole. For I knew in that instance, what was truly amiss, My body was present, but my soul was in abyss.
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Nov 5, 2023
Nov 5, 2023 at 3:58 AM UTC
my body was present, but my soul was in abyss.
My body was there, but not the soul within, I felt something strange, a battle to begin. Unfamiliar feelings, emotions untamed, Lost in a world where I couldn't be named. I moved and spoke, but the words felt astray, As if I were dancing to a tune I couldn't play. My body, a vessel, devoid of the core, A silent, empty vessel, craving something more. In the silence of that moment, I yearned to be whole, To reunite with my soul, to fill the gaping hole. For I knew in that instance, what was truly amiss, My body was present, but my soul was in abyss.
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22/F/Pakistan
Nov 5, 2023
Nov 5, 2023 at 3:58 AM UTC
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