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I want to live right up to when I die and through, beyond the finish line. Not with a gasp and an ugly stumble, but run straight on, strong and triumphal. I want to live right up to when I die with au revoir and not goodbye. I want to live with real expectation and run on into the new creation.
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Oct 18, 2023
Oct 18, 2023 at 2:18 PM UTC
I want to live
I want to live right up to when I die and through, beyond the finish line. Not with a gasp and an ugly stumble, but run straight on, strong and triumphal. I want to live right up to when I die with au revoir and not goodbye. I want to live with real expectation and run on into the new creation.
heard that first l;ine and amed to make it a little more positive
stevejeff
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Oct 18, 2023
Oct 18, 2023 at 2:18 PM UTC
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