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Sensing the loss of you Was hard, raw and angry The realisation that you would not be mine Stung like seawater And howled like a foghorn For months, seeing you cut like a knife Hot, fat tears rolling down my cheeks As I mourned the loss of your love. Sensing the loss of us Was slow, sad and silent The realisation that I was over you Crept like an ant up my leg And whistled like the wind through a window Now, seeing you is like pressing a bruise Our conversations just a nostalgic echo As I mourn the loss of my love.
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Jul 25, 2010
Jul 25, 2010 at 8:04 PM UTC
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Sensing the loss of you Was hard, raw and angry The realisation that you would not be mine Stung like seawater And howled like a foghorn For months, seeing you cut like a knife Hot, fat tears rolling down my cheeks As I mourned the loss of your love. Sensing the loss of us Was slow, sad and silent The realisation that I was over you Crept like an ant up my leg And whistled like the wind through a window Now, seeing you is like pressing a bruise Our conversations just a nostalgic echo As I mourn the loss of my love.
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Jul 25, 2010
Jul 25, 2010 at 8:04 PM UTC
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