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I feel as if you would only look down on me Look down on me as if I were the mere mud, the lumpy messy bothersome mud, t r a p p e d within the crevices of the rubber soles of those over-used hiking boots
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Oct 1, 2013
Oct 1, 2013 at 11:03 AM UTC
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I feel as if you would only look down on me Look down on me as if I were the mere mud, the lumpy messy bothersome mud, t r a p p e d within the crevices of the rubber soles of those over-used hiking boots
This poem talks about the fear of expressing your true feelings towards him.  You body feels lumpy, your soul feels messy, and you feel like a bother; trapped.  Waiting for him to accept you. Waiting for him to realize that you're more than the mud trapped on the bottom of his shoes.
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Oct 1, 2013
Oct 1, 2013 at 11:03 AM UTC
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