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what is the benchmark or minimum for telling someone, "i love you,"? how many i miss yous and i wish you were heres are enough, even minutes after parting? whatever the number is, **** it. because my heart remembers to beat and even attempts to soar with you to heights new, unfound, unseen. where the chittering of nearby birds is both foreign and kind comfort in our hands; where oranges and strawberries grow in tandem, vine over vine, root over root, and fall into us, sweet and kind and lovely. if i were to say it too soon, i'm afraid i'd lose you, your wit, your smile, dumb jokes and blazing blue eyes. and by withholding, i risk combustion, and an end to it all the same. i love you.
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Aug 31, 2023
Aug 31, 2023 at 11:39 PM UTC
benchmarks and grading in love
what is the benchmark or minimum for telling someone, "i love you,"? how many i miss yous and i wish you were heres are enough, even minutes after parting? whatever the number is, **** it. because my heart remembers to beat and even attempts to soar with you to heights new, unfound, unseen. where the chittering of nearby birds is both foreign and kind comfort in our hands; where oranges and strawberries grow in tandem, vine over vine, root over root, and fall into us, sweet and kind and lovely. if i were to say it too soon, i'm afraid i'd lose you, your wit, your smile, dumb jokes and blazing blue eyes. and by withholding, i risk combustion, and an end to it all the same. i love you.
I have never felt a love like this. It's unique and pure but I worry that I'm stupid and easily tricked.
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Aug 31, 2023
Aug 31, 2023 at 11:39 PM UTC
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