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Remember the time When we kissed beneath these stars Before light left the night When you swore we would always be alright Yet now I stand beneath these stars Clutching the shattered pieces of your broken heart And though they cut me so I can not bear to let you go Oh stranger in the rain Please remember we who died Only to prove the might Of those who fear the night
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Sep 30, 2013
Sep 30, 2013 at 5:44 PM UTC
shatteredpieces
Remember the time When we kissed beneath these stars Before light left the night When you swore we would always be alright Yet now I stand beneath these stars Clutching the shattered pieces of your broken heart And though they cut me so I can not bear to let you go Oh stranger in the rain Please remember we who died Only to prove the might Of those who fear the night
This was my first attempt at "differentclothing" I didn't like where I was going with it, as I wanted it to be a bigger picture than two lover's story. So I took the line "oh stranger in the rain" and onward, and reworked everything until I got "differentclothing" but I still really like the first four couplets, so here they are. They don't fit very well with the stranger bit, but I wanted to explain my writing process a bit.
deryck
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Sep 30, 2013
Sep 30, 2013 at 5:44 PM UTC
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