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Dying with a winking eye A smile so broad for death to see Every tooth inside my ancient mouth Expressing radiant love and empathy My cheeks will swell with bulging cheer Well-worn wrinkles form in the corners of grinning lids A starry twinkle amongst exploding nebula iris As silken lashes catch the days last wind A hearty laugh makes a final human sound The merry breath wheezing in and then forever out of cavernous lungs Rattling against homely walls Kicking down the unlocked door, of which you have a key The halls of Amenti are calling now The shrouded veil surrounds the flaming flower As the final grain spills to sandy bottom And the thumping of the ticking heart Stops in life’s twilight hour
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Oct 13, 2013
Oct 13, 2013 at 2:18 PM UTC
I want to die winking (An Ode to Jon Whitacre)
Dying with a winking eye A smile so broad for death to see Every tooth inside my ancient mouth Expressing radiant love and empathy My cheeks will swell with bulging cheer Well-worn wrinkles form in the corners of grinning lids A starry twinkle amongst exploding nebula iris As silken lashes catch the days last wind A hearty laugh makes a final human sound The merry breath wheezing in and then forever out of cavernous lungs Rattling against homely walls Kicking down the unlocked door, of which you have a key The halls of Amenti are calling now The shrouded veil surrounds the flaming flower As the final grain spills to sandy bottom And the thumping of the ticking heart Stops in life’s twilight hour
Jon Whitacre will forever be my dear friend. His smile, laugh, and good cheer lit up my life and his wisdom taught me many things. We loved to climb rocks, run in the woods, learn martial arts, compete, converse and bask in the glory of life. A true man, with a Warrior's heart, whose memory will always be cherished. See you on the other side, Brother.
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Oct 13, 2013
Oct 13, 2013 at 2:18 PM UTC
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