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I simply became a cloud, and        drifted along the sky's set path. because after hating myself for                                                       so                                                                   long, and losing my soul, I finally found peace at the              of a bowl.                                               bottom And this led to losing myself again, but        worse, forgetting that I had even lost myself, including how,          why,                    or                        when. I was lost, and wasn't even looking, was never planning on getting back up, so I found myself at the bottom of a red plastic cup. And with my head beneath that seat, wearing my porcelain crown of shame, I felt my life                     had                           been                                   cheated, who I was, was not who I became. I saw myself looking back at me, a familiar image I thought I once knew. "Who the **** do you think you are," I said. And I replied, "I     used              to                   be                        you."
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Sep 29, 2013
Sep 29, 2013 at 1:47 AM UTC
I used to be you
I simply became a cloud, and        drifted along the sky's set path. because after hating myself for                                                       so                                                                   long, and losing my soul, I finally found peace at the              of a bowl.                                               bottom And this led to losing myself again, but        worse, forgetting that I had even lost myself, including how,          why,                    or                        when. I was lost, and wasn't even looking, was never planning on getting back up, so I found myself at the bottom of a red plastic cup. And with my head beneath that seat, wearing my porcelain crown of shame, I felt my life                     had                           been                                   cheated, who I was, was not who I became. I saw myself looking back at me, a familiar image I thought I once knew. "Who the **** do you think you are," I said. And I replied, "I     used              to                   be                        you."
paul-meadows
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Sep 29, 2013
Sep 29, 2013 at 1:47 AM UTC
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