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Towards the end, there was The Good Place inside of The Dying Place. The raven watches silently. You were drifting on waves of Ativan while I vaped in the courtyard before I flipped the mouse card. Lotioning your feet—now yellowing. “I’m sorry to bother you,” I said to the nurse. “But here, take this” as I handed her the phone I yanked from the wall. No more distractions, please. An advance copy on a projector screen. Downton Abbey in The Dying Place. You couldn’t believe it. But you also couldn’t stay awake. Nowadays when I say “calzone” I’m actually saying “can I have another year on loan?” When I think about bourbon in the rainbow-speckled glass, it’s a sip-by-sip plea to get those years back. Alas… I hold your hand. The dolphin returns. I kiss your head. The mouse rests. One last breath. And the raven's wing lifts.
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Jul 13, 2023
Jul 13, 2023 at 11:43 AM UTC
ANIMAL SPIRIT
Towards the end, there was The Good Place inside of The Dying Place. The raven watches silently. You were drifting on waves of Ativan while I vaped in the courtyard before I flipped the mouse card. Lotioning your feet—now yellowing. “I’m sorry to bother you,” I said to the nurse. “But here, take this” as I handed her the phone I yanked from the wall. No more distractions, please. An advance copy on a projector screen. Downton Abbey in The Dying Place. You couldn’t believe it. But you also couldn’t stay awake. Nowadays when I say “calzone” I’m actually saying “can I have another year on loan?” When I think about bourbon in the rainbow-speckled glass, it’s a sip-by-sip plea to get those years back. Alas… I hold your hand. The dolphin returns. I kiss your head. The mouse rests. One last breath. And the raven's wing lifts.
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M/nashville, tn
Jul 13, 2023
Jul 13, 2023 at 11:43 AM UTC
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