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Loving you is like an ice, It's cold,hard, and limpid. I can see the real you, But soon it melts. Loving you is like a flower, It blooms when it's autumn, Sunlight penetrates the petals, But soon it wilts. Loving you is like a tissue, it erases the tears, brings the laughter, But soon it torn, drowned by the burden of love. Loving you is like a book, Those beautiful verses are you. But soon it ends with a full stop. Loving you is like a music, rhythm rhymes. the only thing I want to hear, But soon the rhymes scatter. The only thing I know about loving you is, Your smile is dangerous, that I was stupid to fall into them. a.b
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Sep 28, 2013
Sep 28, 2013 at 9:51 AM UTC
Loving you is like..
Loving you is like an ice, It's cold,hard, and limpid. I can see the real you, But soon it melts. Loving you is like a flower, It blooms when it's autumn, Sunlight penetrates the petals, But soon it wilts. Loving you is like a tissue, it erases the tears, brings the laughter, But soon it torn, drowned by the burden of love. Loving you is like a book, Those beautiful verses are you. But soon it ends with a full stop. Loving you is like a music, rhythm rhymes. the only thing I want to hear, But soon the rhymes scatter. The only thing I know about loving you is, Your smile is dangerous, that I was stupid to fall into them. a.b
This is my current thought. Sorry if there are some grammatical errors.
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Sep 28, 2013
Sep 28, 2013 at 9:51 AM UTC
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