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There’s a deep forest path that lingers just for a bit, somewhere between stable and healthy and in walking that path one may find himself growing much like the foliage; trees, yawning and vines, curious, spread wild breathing life and air and motion until the path disappears and diminishing greens turn to sullen brown and the desert looms deep breaths are unyielding motion is muddy it doesn’t feel quite right seeing forever isn’t as grand when there’s not much to see it’s so much bigger than the forest seemed to be, isn’t it?
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Jun 29, 2023
Jun 29, 2023 at 8:26 PM UTC
The Forest & the Desert
There’s a deep forest path that lingers just for a bit, somewhere between stable and healthy and in walking that path one may find himself growing much like the foliage; trees, yawning and vines, curious, spread wild breathing life and air and motion until the path disappears and diminishing greens turn to sullen brown and the desert looms deep breaths are unyielding motion is muddy it doesn’t feel quite right seeing forever isn’t as grand when there’s not much to see it’s so much bigger than the forest seemed to be, isn’t it?
a little pompous but i like the metaphor
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Jun 29, 2023
Jun 29, 2023 at 8:26 PM UTC
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