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the gift in a dilapidated two-story country home empty for miles through holes in the walls on either side blackened supports and ramshackle comfort tackled by fire caressed by rain you can see through to the second floor if you tilt your head, expose blood subways, let your hair grasp at spine the fault of past residents mirrored in big blue eyes a world of green and brown surrounding, no, growing from this pin-prick destination left to the wind, to the quiet the underscored call of persons, stronger than I, who knew they were finished and walked away. who saw the green and the brown, and looked at the home, once warm, I'm sure, and thought, "there's so little here, compressed, with an expanse beyond so much friendlier than brittle walls, tender floors, metal and wood." so they left and rightfully so.
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Jun 29, 2023
Jun 29, 2023 at 8:21 PM UTC
metal and wood
the gift in a dilapidated two-story country home empty for miles through holes in the walls on either side blackened supports and ramshackle comfort tackled by fire caressed by rain you can see through to the second floor if you tilt your head, expose blood subways, let your hair grasp at spine the fault of past residents mirrored in big blue eyes a world of green and brown surrounding, no, growing from this pin-prick destination left to the wind, to the quiet the underscored call of persons, stronger than I, who knew they were finished and walked away. who saw the green and the brown, and looked at the home, once warm, I'm sure, and thought, "there's so little here, compressed, with an expanse beyond so much friendlier than brittle walls, tender floors, metal and wood." so they left and rightfully so.
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Jun 29, 2023
Jun 29, 2023 at 8:21 PM UTC
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