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see what I see, walk in my shoes. go down the paths I do when the road winds in forever opposite directions. feel what I feel, embrace the earth, the winds, the simple touch of water upon my skin. let the feelings I feel, pain, restriction, joy, pleasure, and despair. let them sink beneath the skin, into the chill of my veins the individual cells connecting the tip of my fingers to your very touch. go back to the second line of the first verse: walk in my shoes. how can you not see the flowers ceasing to exist without the help of the lowly bumblebee? how can my heart not flutter without your existent touch? but you don't see what I see, you're not feeling what I'm feeling, you say you care about the bumblebee when its your flowers in the garden. so my flowers sit, alone, wilted and waterless in an unattended garden. with me in the middle, kneeled down, the autumn chill blowing us all away.
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Jun 1, 2023
Jun 1, 2023 at 1:58 AM UTC
hey, it's me.
see what I see, walk in my shoes. go down the paths I do when the road winds in forever opposite directions. feel what I feel, embrace the earth, the winds, the simple touch of water upon my skin. let the feelings I feel, pain, restriction, joy, pleasure, and despair. let them sink beneath the skin, into the chill of my veins the individual cells connecting the tip of my fingers to your very touch. go back to the second line of the first verse: walk in my shoes. how can you not see the flowers ceasing to exist without the help of the lowly bumblebee? how can my heart not flutter without your existent touch? but you don't see what I see, you're not feeling what I'm feeling, you say you care about the bumblebee when its your flowers in the garden. so my flowers sit, alone, wilted and waterless in an unattended garden. with me in the middle, kneeled down, the autumn chill blowing us all away.
moonlit_writer27
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Jun 1, 2023
Jun 1, 2023 at 1:58 AM UTC
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