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There's a secret only one angel knew. It goes like this: There is a place that once grew. A garden made for two. A tree. A treason. Mankind evicted from Eden, ... for an obscure reason. Curious, An angel flew down -biting into the apple- Adam and Eve had eaten. Because the Lord's plan must be broken? The Angel pressed their luck... But ...why plant a tree,simply,to test their trust? Now in a rush to reveal what was learned -before they could soar past those pearly gates- Lurid illumination eviscerates their pristine wings. The Lord sees All: and He is Irate. They create a crater as they collide with our world; exiled forever from the Lord's estate. They awake as a woman for their costly mistake. Her place amongst the holy host is gone. Cursed with forbidden knowledge. Awareness of right and wrong. Exchanging a halo for free-will: Heaven is no longer a place she belongs. The Angel outcast. Cast out from her home. Forced to roam this world all alone. She sought out the Truth; Then her faith became clouded. There is few who listen to what she says now: yet still she shouts it. She tells me-the former angel yells, "Devour fruit from the Tree of Knowledge ...if you dare. but beware!! God did not plant that tree... It was already there." -
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May 22, 2023
May 22, 2023 at 7:05 AM UTC
The angel outcast.
There's a secret only one angel knew. It goes like this: There is a place that once grew. A garden made for two. A tree. A treason. Mankind evicted from Eden, ... for an obscure reason. Curious, An angel flew down -biting into the apple- Adam and Eve had eaten. Because the Lord's plan must be broken? The Angel pressed their luck... But ...why plant a tree,simply,to test their trust? Now in a rush to reveal what was learned -before they could soar past those pearly gates- Lurid illumination eviscerates their pristine wings. The Lord sees All: and He is Irate. They create a crater as they collide with our world; exiled forever from the Lord's estate. They awake as a woman for their costly mistake. Her place amongst the holy host is gone. Cursed with forbidden knowledge. Awareness of right and wrong. Exchanging a halo for free-will: Heaven is no longer a place she belongs. The Angel outcast. Cast out from her home. Forced to roam this world all alone. She sought out the Truth; Then her faith became clouded. There is few who listen to what she says now: yet still she shouts it. She tells me-the former angel yells, "Devour fruit from the Tree of Knowledge ...if you dare. but beware!! God did not plant that tree... It was already there." -
A (short) story reimagining the origins of the Tree of Knowledge and of an angel exiled after partaking in its fruit.
Uncannyjason
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32/M/Seattle
May 22, 2023
May 22, 2023 at 7:05 AM UTC
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