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Alone in a boatful of swaying drunks ‘five, four, three, two, one’ the fireworks crackled stale light. ‘You’re looking the wrong way,’ they laughed at my back. ‘You’re missing it.’ I spied two shooting stars. Stars of heavenly hope, cascading calm, reminding me of nature’s wild and wonderful wit. ‘No, you’re looking the wrong way,’ I laughed at them back. ‘You’re missing it.’ Maybe the crowd doesn’t need following.
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May 11, 2023
May 11, 2023 at 12:26 PM UTC
The Instinct of Looking
Alone in a boatful of swaying drunks ‘five, four, three, two, one’ the fireworks crackled stale light. ‘You’re looking the wrong way,’ they laughed at my back. ‘You’re missing it.’ I spied two shooting stars. Stars of heavenly hope, cascading calm, reminding me of nature’s wild and wonderful wit. ‘No, you’re looking the wrong way,’ I laughed at them back. ‘You’re missing it.’ Maybe the crowd doesn’t need following.
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May 11, 2023
May 11, 2023 at 12:26 PM UTC
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