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Escaping trachea death rattle on my tongue leaves a taste of vacancy; can barely breathe, these black lungs wheeze, never sleep heavenly. Born nakedly, basic needs became an aching grief; never what it seems no sanctions nor safeties, all i achieve is empty pleas. Is it heresy if a nightmare's just how demons dream? Hellaciously faces scream awakened by the smell of kerosene; even atheist abomination, disgraced and faithless, keeps belief in satan in this place of fiends.
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May 1, 2023
May 1, 2023 at 3:35 PM UTC
Vacancy (1st draft)
Escaping trachea death rattle on my tongue leaves a taste of vacancy; can barely breathe, these black lungs wheeze, never sleep heavenly. Born nakedly, basic needs became an aching grief; never what it seems no sanctions nor safeties, all i achieve is empty pleas. Is it heresy if a nightmare's just how demons dream? Hellaciously faces scream awakened by the smell of kerosene; even atheist abomination, disgraced and faithless, keeps belief in satan in this place of fiends.
Still had writer's block but this one actually came out pretty quick... was also experimenting a bit with multisyllabic rhyme
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May 1, 2023
May 1, 2023 at 3:35 PM UTC
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