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When I was   younger, I had to learn sit and wait to   write.   I  would get impatient and force it. If you read it, you could tell. Now I’m quite a bit older, and I quit trying. Fodder seems to be   everywhere. I can write about the most mundane things. Today I’m at the   library waiting for my girlfriend to finish up at the dentist. She’s getting her   teeth cleaned. All my drinking ruined   my teeth. When I got them   pulled a year ago, there wasn’t a   good tooth in my head. I have dentures now, so I don’t have to   worry about how much I drink. I know this isn’t a very good poem, but hey, there she is all shiny and bright…   and sober.
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Mar 3, 2023
Mar 3, 2023 at 1:42 PM UTC
Don't Force It
When I was   younger, I had to learn sit and wait to   write.   I  would get impatient and force it. If you read it, you could tell. Now I’m quite a bit older, and I quit trying. Fodder seems to be   everywhere. I can write about the most mundane things. Today I’m at the   library waiting for my girlfriend to finish up at the dentist. She’s getting her   teeth cleaned. All my drinking ruined   my teeth. When I got them   pulled a year ago, there wasn’t a   good tooth in my head. I have dentures now, so I don’t have to   worry about how much I drink. I know this isn’t a very good poem, but hey, there she is all shiny and bright…   and sober.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ydsv-JNhEdU&t=200s Here's a link to my you tube channel where I read from my recent book, Seedy Town Blues Colled Poems, available on Amazon.com.
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59/M/Clear Lake
Mar 3, 2023
Mar 3, 2023 at 1:42 PM UTC
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