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There is the house where I used to live. Where I had so many smiles. Age and time has distanced me, Along with many miles. In the field beside the brook, A little girl plays, - carefree. And on closer inspection I find, She looks a lot like me. And I wonder if she found my hiding spot, The one I stashed all my treasures in. Oh, but she couldn't have, because I see now, A garage is where that would have been. And the tree that once held my tire swing, Appears to have fallen some time ago. The birdhouse I built with Dad is now gone, And I wonder just where did it go. A barn has now taken the place of, The great oak where I carved my name. And I wish I had never come back here. Because nothing seems the same.
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Jul 21, 2010
Jul 21, 2010 at 5:20 PM UTC
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There is the house where I used to live. Where I had so many smiles. Age and time has distanced me, Along with many miles. In the field beside the brook, A little girl plays, - carefree. And on closer inspection I find, She looks a lot like me. And I wonder if she found my hiding spot, The one I stashed all my treasures in. Oh, but she couldn't have, because I see now, A garage is where that would have been. And the tree that once held my tire swing, Appears to have fallen some time ago. The birdhouse I built with Dad is now gone, And I wonder just where did it go. A barn has now taken the place of, The great oak where I carved my name. And I wish I had never come back here. Because nothing seems the same.
deanena-tierney
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47/F/American
Jul 21, 2010
Jul 21, 2010 at 5:20 PM UTC
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