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Not dinner time yet, on bed I am drawing you, your back the book and the red candle the almost empty mirror image We've seen enough of the city today and no longer immediately jump on each other even though we're on vacation I love you equally profound - looking, drawing and feeling how absently totally present you are, your bare shoulder which I caress with my eyes your full attention for the story and for me as soon as you put the book down It's something from years elusively there even if we don't pay attention to it or if it's absent for a while
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Nov 24, 2022
Nov 24, 2022 at 3:30 AM UTC
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Not dinner time yet, on bed I am drawing you, your back the book and the red candle the almost empty mirror image We've seen enough of the city today and no longer immediately jump on each other even though we're on vacation I love you equally profound - looking, drawing and feeling how absently totally present you are, your bare shoulder which I caress with my eyes your full attention for the story and for me as soon as you put the book down It's something from years elusively there even if we don't pay attention to it or if it's absent for a while
"Interior (Model Reading)" (1925, Edward Hopper), hotel in Santa Fe, New Mexico For Dory dK Collection "NightWatch"
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Nov 24, 2022
Nov 24, 2022 at 3:30 AM UTC
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