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"With the going down of the sun And in the morning" go the memorable lines And when the sun sets in my corner of the planet It does indeed seem a good time for remembrance. From the days when we lived among trees and grasses The setting of the sun must have been a touch-point For gathering one's clan members close And with the brightening of each new day There must have come a great but quiet relief To have made it to the other side of the great darkness. In a quiet twilight today With the season's leaves all on the ground After a blustery night yesterday I think about the coming night ahead Only in terms of slowing down, Some good food And an anticipated restful sleep. But there are little gaps here and there in our lives Aren't there? The ones just away Or whom we have lost for good. And at the going down of the sun And in the morning They are with us briefly again.
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Oct 27, 2022
Oct 27, 2022 at 5:40 PM UTC
A Soft Remembering
"With the going down of the sun And in the morning" go the memorable lines And when the sun sets in my corner of the planet It does indeed seem a good time for remembrance. From the days when we lived among trees and grasses The setting of the sun must have been a touch-point For gathering one's clan members close And with the brightening of each new day There must have come a great but quiet relief To have made it to the other side of the great darkness. In a quiet twilight today With the season's leaves all on the ground After a blustery night yesterday I think about the coming night ahead Only in terms of slowing down, Some good food And an anticipated restful sleep. But there are little gaps here and there in our lives Aren't there? The ones just away Or whom we have lost for good. And at the going down of the sun And in the morning They are with us briefly again.
Remembrance and nightfall
ottaross
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Oct 27, 2022
Oct 27, 2022 at 5:40 PM UTC
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