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Sunny day in June, the tenth to be exact The horrible day my sister was attacked Beth was in the house, her friend Mark outside She was cleaning,he in the yard kept with pride Beth Anne was on hands and knees scrubbing the floor When she heard real gunshots, at least she swore Snuck to the window and peered out with care On the rocky driveway, saw Mark sprawled out there Been shot three times in his back,lay in his blood Beth saw her ex...with a .38 he stood While terrified, behind the aquarium she ducked Brad blundered in dressed in hunters camouflage- **** Her heart hammering in her ears, bursts of short breaths Saw him through the murky water, planning two deaths Beth Anne cowered down praying to her dear Lord He found her, pulled her up by the hair, fired once more The bullet blew off her ear and traveled on down Collapsed her lungs, in her blood she would drown Brad disappeared and the firing just stopped For Mexico he fled, red ranger with white top Beth dragged herself the complete length of the rug Called 911, shed been shot...head ringing from slug She was determined to live, wouldn't give up the fight But then she passed out endangering her plight Came the Greeley police, fire trucks, EMT's Assessed the situation, perp further he flees They all worked on Mark, too late he was dead One smart responder....woman shot in the head They spreading out rushed the house, found my sis Beth was unresponsive, victim almost missed Speeding to Weld County General, sirens blaring Got her in the ER cut off what she was wearing O.R. She went with damage extensive Not much hope, docs and staff apprehensive For many hours they sawed, pinned, stitched and closed The ICU threat of infection posed Her body and face were unrecognizable Family stood believing the impossible Appeared an Adonis with blonde hair and blue eyes Talk of afterlife evidently not lies Her guardian angel told Beth he was there Would appear much later, in death they would share
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Sep 14, 2013
Sep 14, 2013 at 6:47 PM UTC
The Monster In Camouflage
Sunny day in June, the tenth to be exact The horrible day my sister was attacked Beth was in the house, her friend Mark outside She was cleaning,he in the yard kept with pride Beth Anne was on hands and knees scrubbing the floor When she heard real gunshots, at least she swore Snuck to the window and peered out with care On the rocky driveway, saw Mark sprawled out there Been shot three times in his back,lay in his blood Beth saw her ex...with a .38 he stood While terrified, behind the aquarium she ducked Brad blundered in dressed in hunters camouflage- **** Her heart hammering in her ears, bursts of short breaths Saw him through the murky water, planning two deaths Beth Anne cowered down praying to her dear Lord He found her, pulled her up by the hair, fired once more The bullet blew off her ear and traveled on down Collapsed her lungs, in her blood she would drown Brad disappeared and the firing just stopped For Mexico he fled, red ranger with white top Beth dragged herself the complete length of the rug Called 911, shed been shot...head ringing from slug She was determined to live, wouldn't give up the fight But then she passed out endangering her plight Came the Greeley police, fire trucks, EMT's Assessed the situation, perp further he flees They all worked on Mark, too late he was dead One smart responder....woman shot in the head They spreading out rushed the house, found my sis Beth was unresponsive, victim almost missed Speeding to Weld County General, sirens blaring Got her in the ER cut off what she was wearing O.R. She went with damage extensive Not much hope, docs and staff apprehensive For many hours they sawed, pinned, stitched and closed The ICU threat of infection posed Her body and face were unrecognizable Family stood believing the impossible Appeared an Adonis with blonde hair and blue eyes Talk of afterlife evidently not lies Her guardian angel told Beth he was there Would appear much later, in death they would share
Sorry this is so lengthy. Its true and I tried to condense it as much as possible
bernadette-rivera
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Sep 14, 2013
Sep 14, 2013 at 6:47 PM UTC
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