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the countryside passing by gradually from the windows in the car. wind whistling. he stops abruptly parking the car at the side of the dirt road. you both exit the vehicle. he grabs you by your sweaty hands and lifts you onto the roof of the car. slowly, he pulls himself up as well. you both stare at the cornfield as the sun is setting along the line of pine trees. you just watch nature, calmly, quietly. his hand touches yours and you lean on his shoulder. he kisses your forehead and you smile brightly, seeing midnight stars in his golden hour blue eyes. he climbs down and lowers you as the sun sinks below the brush. he walks over to the passenger side where you sit for the drive. he buckles you in and kisses your lips. they taste like cherry chapstick. he packs into the drivers seat and looks over at you adoringly. you return the same exact breathtaking look. the car starts moving, just as leisurely as before. soon you both spot an open field hidden in between millions of shrubs and trees and freshly bloomed flowers. his teeth glisten as he grins so widely. your wild hair tamed by the halt of the engine whispers “yes” to his childlike disposition. you both book it out of the car and bolt towards the field, yelling and pretending to fly. you get a head start and twirl like a ballerina in the light of the early moon with clouds forming circles around her majestic beauty. he comes up right behind you and scoops you up and hugs you so tightly. you break out of the hug and tackle him to the dry grass. you both roll around, laughing, giggling, smelling pollen, acting crazy. you both stop for a split second, seeing fireworks explode and specks of the new moon in each other’s pupils. clarity strikes you and you fall softly onto his chest with a sigh of pure bliss. he strokes your hair, the motion of the movement of his fingers soothes your heartbeat. you could die happily at this moment. but he hears the howl of a coyote and perks up. you both jump up with enough energy to power a twelve ton truck. you race to the red jeep parked on the side of the dusty road. breathing heavily, you pack into the automobile. frightened, you turn to him and you both burst out laughing, throwing your heads back cackling like crows. perhaps, you were afraid in that moment but nothing allays you better than him and his confident mentality. once more, the engine restarts and the road behind you grows smaller and smaller, the moon above sparkling, leaving spots on the car where she shines down on you. she knows, she knows, she knows, he loves you to the moon and all the way back to earth a thousand billion times
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Jul 17, 2022
Jul 17, 2022 at 12:58 PM UTC
la luna
the countryside passing by gradually from the windows in the car. wind whistling. he stops abruptly parking the car at the side of the dirt road. you both exit the vehicle. he grabs you by your sweaty hands and lifts you onto the roof of the car. slowly, he pulls himself up as well. you both stare at the cornfield as the sun is setting along the line of pine trees. you just watch nature, calmly, quietly. his hand touches yours and you lean on his shoulder. he kisses your forehead and you smile brightly, seeing midnight stars in his golden hour blue eyes. he climbs down and lowers you as the sun sinks below the brush. he walks over to the passenger side where you sit for the drive. he buckles you in and kisses your lips. they taste like cherry chapstick. he packs into the drivers seat and looks over at you adoringly. you return the same exact breathtaking look. the car starts moving, just as leisurely as before. soon you both spot an open field hidden in between millions of shrubs and trees and freshly bloomed flowers. his teeth glisten as he grins so widely. your wild hair tamed by the halt of the engine whispers “yes” to his childlike disposition. you both book it out of the car and bolt towards the field, yelling and pretending to fly. you get a head start and twirl like a ballerina in the light of the early moon with clouds forming circles around her majestic beauty. he comes up right behind you and scoops you up and hugs you so tightly. you break out of the hug and tackle him to the dry grass. you both roll around, laughing, giggling, smelling pollen, acting crazy. you both stop for a split second, seeing fireworks explode and specks of the new moon in each other’s pupils. clarity strikes you and you fall softly onto his chest with a sigh of pure bliss. he strokes your hair, the motion of the movement of his fingers soothes your heartbeat. you could die happily at this moment. but he hears the howl of a coyote and perks up. you both jump up with enough energy to power a twelve ton truck. you race to the red jeep parked on the side of the dusty road. breathing heavily, you pack into the automobile. frightened, you turn to him and you both burst out laughing, throwing your heads back cackling like crows. perhaps, you were afraid in that moment but nothing allays you better than him and his confident mentality. once more, the engine restarts and the road behind you grows smaller and smaller, the moon above sparkling, leaving spots on the car where she shines down on you. she knows, she knows, she knows, he loves you to the moon and all the way back to earth a thousand billion times
the scenario i thought of last night. i wanted to make the reader more involved, so i made it second person. this is the type of stuff i imagine. 7/17/22
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Jul 17, 2022
Jul 17, 2022 at 12:58 PM UTC
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