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Your other self watches softly from the far side of the room, a decade and a half or so between you. I line you up, placing one over the other like wax paper for tracing. More lines this time around, more furrowed concern and a sternness in the pursing of your lips— flatlining, discerning. I wonder what has darkened your eyes. If not time, something quicker and more violent. It hangs in the drapes about your face, upholstery of the self, rolled out. Nothing wavers in your gaze, no candles dancing. Only smoke of a dream, thinning, deferred— snuffed out.
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Jun 29, 2022
Jun 29, 2022 at 3:10 PM UTC
Padre Mío
Your other self watches softly from the far side of the room, a decade and a half or so between you. I line you up, placing one over the other like wax paper for tracing. More lines this time around, more furrowed concern and a sternness in the pursing of your lips— flatlining, discerning. I wonder what has darkened your eyes. If not time, something quicker and more violent. It hangs in the drapes about your face, upholstery of the self, rolled out. Nothing wavers in your gaze, no candles dancing. Only smoke of a dream, thinning, deferred— snuffed out.
Martel
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22/F/United States
Jun 29, 2022
Jun 29, 2022 at 3:10 PM UTC
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