A new life granted
Glad to be starting over
Better days await
A totally free spirit
No longer so appeasing

deanena-tierney

Dee Tanka

Sounds like a plan to me Deanena..........a good one.

Pretty good for someone who said they had no clue how to do these things. Great job.

This sounds a lot like something I would write...hits close to home if I am reading in between the lines correctly

a yearned fantasy so very rarely turned reality. you've conveyed what many of us think on a day-to-day basis into poetry. good 'un.