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people wait in line to receive injections: lumps of curdled cream floating in the coffee, expired prematurely 4.16.2022
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Apr 16, 2022
Apr 16, 2022 at 8:01 PM UTC
COVID-19 tanka: 001
people wait in line to receive injections: lumps of curdled cream floating in the coffee, expired prematurely 4.16.2022
5/6/5/6/6 English contemporary syllable count Includes a traditional kakekotoba (pivot/"swing bridge") Metaphor & symbolism stays intact when the tanka above is read from bottom to top
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Apr 16, 2022
Apr 16, 2022 at 8:01 PM UTC
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