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I can hear metallic words emerging from your lips All throughout the best part of my day Inviting all my inner focus to your bitter uproar Endorsing all my resolve to move away Your brash recklessness cast dark shadows down Of great anguish and unbearable distress As you continuously violate all of my emotions With all this agitation you profess You seem to find the greatest of comfort In confessing all your misery But I find myself totally unsympathetic To your persistent verbal parodies So if you stop and wonder why, I am no longer here If you are uncertain of the very reason Take a good listen to yourself and you will see why My emotions are no longer in your open hunting season
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Jul 15, 2010
Jul 15, 2010 at 6:22 PM UTC
Open Season
I can hear metallic words emerging from your lips All throughout the best part of my day Inviting all my inner focus to your bitter uproar Endorsing all my resolve to move away Your brash recklessness cast dark shadows down Of great anguish and unbearable distress As you continuously violate all of my emotions With all this agitation you profess You seem to find the greatest of comfort In confessing all your misery But I find myself totally unsympathetic To your persistent verbal parodies So if you stop and wonder why, I am no longer here If you are uncertain of the very reason Take a good listen to yourself and you will see why My emotions are no longer in your open hunting season
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Jul 15, 2010
Jul 15, 2010 at 6:22 PM UTC
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