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When I looked at you, I didn't see a person I saw blueprints for a castle Strong, proud, and surrounded by sunshine The more I fell for you the faster I built Placing bricks with eyes closed out of fear that if I opened them you wouldn't look like my plans anymore I worked until I had nothing left but delusion and ****** fingers And when I finally took a step inside, I fell through the floor You forgot to place the foundation, and my future collapsed Homes cannot be built inside people And dreams cannot be built upon clouds
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Jan 9, 2022
Jan 9, 2022 at 11:16 PM UTC
Dream Castle
When I looked at you, I didn't see a person I saw blueprints for a castle Strong, proud, and surrounded by sunshine The more I fell for you the faster I built Placing bricks with eyes closed out of fear that if I opened them you wouldn't look like my plans anymore I worked until I had nothing left but delusion and ****** fingers And when I finally took a step inside, I fell through the floor You forgot to place the foundation, and my future collapsed Homes cannot be built inside people And dreams cannot be built upon clouds
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Jan 9, 2022
Jan 9, 2022 at 11:16 PM UTC
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