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The last time I drove up here With these people You were with me too You said you liked The farmland- it appealed To your sense Of order I tried to explain to you How disorderly It really was- Because it's really The natural world, Uninfluenced by man, That's orderly Because us humans, With our self-destructive Monocultures which exist To support our self-destructive Industries, Produce 98% of our corn For just about anything But human consumption... But you didn't understand that Of course, So we sat in silence For a few minutes As I failed To understand you too And I should have known then, As you failed to see the world As an oncoming apocalypse Revealed through  shades of corn And I failed To see the world As anything but, That though everything was fine On so many levels Beneath the surface, At some fundamental level We, like the corn industry, Were unsustainable
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Aug 31, 2013
Aug 31, 2013 at 12:39 AM UTC
The Apocalypse In Shades of Corn, Redux
The last time I drove up here With these people You were with me too You said you liked The farmland- it appealed To your sense Of order I tried to explain to you How disorderly It really was- Because it's really The natural world, Uninfluenced by man, That's orderly Because us humans, With our self-destructive Monocultures which exist To support our self-destructive Industries, Produce 98% of our corn For just about anything But human consumption... But you didn't understand that Of course, So we sat in silence For a few minutes As I failed To understand you too And I should have known then, As you failed to see the world As an oncoming apocalypse Revealed through  shades of corn And I failed To see the world As anything but, That though everything was fine On so many levels Beneath the surface, At some fundamental level We, like the corn industry, Were unsustainable
jimmy-king
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Aug 31, 2013
Aug 31, 2013 at 12:39 AM UTC
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