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You're the end to all words to express my love. __(fullstop)__ But do we ever talk, with eyes so set on- _one another?_ __(we must see the words)__ Do we strongly love the other, as the other thinks of- _themselves?_ I often see a chance for more, __(just add a comma)__ You're not one to take my breath, or steal my heart, But how could I not exclaim- at my ears hearing your voice! __(setting myself as an exclamation mark)__ So I'd only question- whether the words and _expressions,_ Are far too much? __(I'm open to your suggestions)__
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Dec 27, 2021
Dec 27, 2021 at 5:27 AM UTC
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You're the end to all words to express my love. __(fullstop)__ But do we ever talk, with eyes so set on- _one another?_ __(we must see the words)__ Do we strongly love the other, as the other thinks of- _themselves?_ I often see a chance for more, __(just add a comma)__ You're not one to take my breath, or steal my heart, But how could I not exclaim- at my ears hearing your voice! __(setting myself as an exclamation mark)__ So I'd only question- whether the words and _expressions,_ Are far too much? __(I'm open to your suggestions)__
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27/M/Zimbabwe
Dec 27, 2021
Dec 27, 2021 at 5:27 AM UTC
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