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You came an unexpected gift and a surprising one too. And as they placed a label which read "most valuable" and that I should instead take you by heart and remove all other arts which were sketched on my mind, I obeyed, but opening the wrapper I couldn't find what was promised, you. You weren't what they labelled, but I still found you quite intriguing, as you changed colours like a chameleon, shapes like water from me struggling with breathing, to those sacs of boulders which hung from my shoulders to those numerous lashes and beatings, their scars which I could still find on those tunnels of my mind, the more I grew older. But they kept insisting still that the label was not mistaken and that it was just a while uphill when I would finally feel your thrill and  that you would be what your label said all the time "the most valuable gift that I could ever find" but instead I found a compensation. Some reparations' for a ****** a war and those thousands of hours of blood on trail underneath this hill you were an unexpected gift, a surprising one too but an unnecessary one still.
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Dec 16, 2021
Dec 16, 2021 at 12:44 PM UTC
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You came an unexpected gift and a surprising one too. And as they placed a label which read "most valuable" and that I should instead take you by heart and remove all other arts which were sketched on my mind, I obeyed, but opening the wrapper I couldn't find what was promised, you. You weren't what they labelled, but I still found you quite intriguing, as you changed colours like a chameleon, shapes like water from me struggling with breathing, to those sacs of boulders which hung from my shoulders to those numerous lashes and beatings, their scars which I could still find on those tunnels of my mind, the more I grew older. But they kept insisting still that the label was not mistaken and that it was just a while uphill when I would finally feel your thrill and  that you would be what your label said all the time "the most valuable gift that I could ever find" but instead I found a compensation. Some reparations' for a ****** a war and those thousands of hours of blood on trail underneath this hill you were an unexpected gift, a surprising one too but an unnecessary one still.
i thought i could never cry again but today i wrote a poem and i am crying reading my own poem lol
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22/M/India
Dec 16, 2021
Dec 16, 2021 at 12:44 PM UTC
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