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I wish to share a story of when I nearly met my fate- A tale of an adventure, and a quest I had to make A story of an abandoned mine- A search for silver and gold- Of prospectors, and the miners- And the secrets they must hold My father used to pan for gold in the mountains and their streams- And found enough of the elusive stuff to make my mother's wedding rings. I thought that I would try my hand- to see what I could find- So I set out to seek the entrance to an old, abandoned, mine I left for Arizona,      to Prescott, I wished to go -     Crossed the Rio Grande,    on thru New Mexico. Finally got to Phoenix -    800 miles and count'n,      then north, up to Prescott,         Thumb Butte, and Granite Mountain.             I pitched my tent on Granite Creek,           with great anticipation-            Checked the notes from my father's quotes,                 and began the exploration    With my father's tin pan packed in a bag- and his pic-ax at my side- I felt like a real "old timer", with heaven as my guide.            I found the one I was looking for-                 with a darkened cave as the entrance door-            And a handmade sign on a rotting board, said "Welcome Friend, 1894." Well, I picked and I chipped! and I chipped and I picked! til the sores on my hands ran red-              When I felt some dirt, drifting down on my shirt- and some pebbles hit my head. It only took a second- for the ground to start to quake- The dirt was falling faster, and the walls began to shake. I ran as fast as I knew how, toward that entrance door- When the last crosstimber broke in half, and came crashing to the floor! Now, I don't know how much time had passed- since all of that began- But felt as if I had been in a trance- when someone took my hand. I grabbed my shirt-tail, wiped my eyes- tilt my head to see- And saw a sun-dried, weathered face, looking down on me! He wore a wrinkled old hat, an old flannel shirt- Raggedy old pants, and a mile's worth of dirt- He had a beard of silver threads, with a tinge of ginger root- His hands were thick, and calloused, and their color matched his boots. He gave me a jug of water that came from the nearby creek As I began to take a drink- he began to speak- "Strange thing about abandoned mines- they wish to be left alone, To keep the souls of all of those- who often called them home." His voice began to tremble- as he spoke those woeful words, He seemed to be recalling many things he'd seen and heard. "It isn't greed that brought you here, I can see that, in your eyes, it's not just ore, you're looking for- But another kind of prize." "You must go back to your domain, and you'll find that treasure chest- For it lies deep within your heart- and in those folks you favor best." I shut my eyes, said a prayer-   and asked, if what I did was wrong? When I finished, and said "amen", that old man was gone. I never asked him for his name-     or the place from whence he came-     Some things are better left in silence- and not to be explained. I went back to take another look, and gather up my gear- Tried to find that “Welcome” sign, but, it too, had disappeared. I stood in "awe,and wonder,"- of the place that I had found- And with my eyes, realized, I had trod on hallowed ground. Going home I pondered, 'o'er the words that old man said- But, did all that really happen,    or was it from the "bumps" upon my head? I got back home, and cracked a smile, As I strode up to the door- And there, hung a handmade sign on a rotting board, said-  "Welcome Home, 1894!"
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Aug 28, 2013
Aug 28, 2013 at 9:59 AM UTC
"1894"
I wish to share a story of when I nearly met my fate- A tale of an adventure, and a quest I had to make A story of an abandoned mine- A search for silver and gold- Of prospectors, and the miners- And the secrets they must hold My father used to pan for gold in the mountains and their streams- And found enough of the elusive stuff to make my mother's wedding rings. I thought that I would try my hand- to see what I could find- So I set out to seek the entrance to an old, abandoned, mine I left for Arizona,      to Prescott, I wished to go -     Crossed the Rio Grande,    on thru New Mexico. Finally got to Phoenix -    800 miles and count'n,      then north, up to Prescott,         Thumb Butte, and Granite Mountain.             I pitched my tent on Granite Creek,           with great anticipation-            Checked the notes from my father's quotes,                 and began the exploration    With my father's tin pan packed in a bag- and his pic-ax at my side- I felt like a real "old timer", with heaven as my guide.            I found the one I was looking for-                 with a darkened cave as the entrance door-            And a handmade sign on a rotting board, said "Welcome Friend, 1894." Well, I picked and I chipped! and I chipped and I picked! til the sores on my hands ran red-              When I felt some dirt, drifting down on my shirt- and some pebbles hit my head. It only took a second- for the ground to start to quake- The dirt was falling faster, and the walls began to shake. I ran as fast as I knew how, toward that entrance door- When the last crosstimber broke in half, and came crashing to the floor! Now, I don't know how much time had passed- since all of that began- But felt as if I had been in a trance- when someone took my hand. I grabbed my shirt-tail, wiped my eyes- tilt my head to see- And saw a sun-dried, weathered face, looking down on me! He wore a wrinkled old hat, an old flannel shirt- Raggedy old pants, and a mile's worth of dirt- He had a beard of silver threads, with a tinge of ginger root- His hands were thick, and calloused, and their color matched his boots. He gave me a jug of water that came from the nearby creek As I began to take a drink- he began to speak- "Strange thing about abandoned mines- they wish to be left alone, To keep the souls of all of those- who often called them home." His voice began to tremble- as he spoke those woeful words, He seemed to be recalling many things he'd seen and heard. "It isn't greed that brought you here, I can see that, in your eyes, it's not just ore, you're looking for- But another kind of prize." "You must go back to your domain, and you'll find that treasure chest- For it lies deep within your heart- and in those folks you favor best." I shut my eyes, said a prayer-   and asked, if what I did was wrong? When I finished, and said "amen", that old man was gone. I never asked him for his name-     or the place from whence he came-     Some things are better left in silence- and not to be explained. I went back to take another look, and gather up my gear- Tried to find that “Welcome” sign, but, it too, had disappeared. I stood in "awe,and wonder,"- of the place that I had found- And with my eyes, realized, I had trod on hallowed ground. Going home I pondered, 'o'er the words that old man said- But, did all that really happen,    or was it from the "bumps" upon my head? I got back home, and cracked a smile, As I strode up to the door- And there, hung a handmade sign on a rotting board, said-  "Welcome Home, 1894!"
richard-riddle
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Aug 28, 2013
Aug 28, 2013 at 9:59 AM UTC
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