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Adjacent places in space, alternating waves and fluctuating states encased in ancient clay taking vague shape creates and unmakes its own paper maché face; portrayed, gave name, draped- vagrant flame ablaze, nascent and awake. Into the fray, blades flaying flesh agape, my skin scraped, nothing safe; I must leave no trace and base no faith in erased slate; afraid, higher stakes played, will I pay? No way to relate, what could I ever say to convey? Earth quakes cities vacated and razed as heavenly body vibrates reasserting reign; tectonic plates break, fissures snake, aimless traipsing fingertips; hastily laid basement's pavement caves in, labyrinthine maze of narrow, harrowed straits dig my grave. No escape from this cage, I pace- my weight betrayed limping and lame, graceless skating figure eights pirouette rotate as frame decays to waste, body aches with age and dismay, lines tracing pain I await the day and for whose sake? Chaste, craving a naked embrace to kiss on the nape, just a taste could stave or slake; gazes trade- sudden sun rays, through clouds grey laced, my eyes dilate, invading the gates of my brain. Breath bated, taken away; fates interlaced or am i only swayed astray by another wraith that will fade into shade? Emaciated, to be slain by my own starvation and hunger pangs? Will circle of veins be exanguinated, drained as seedling baby daisies' chains are spewed and scattered into May in springtime bathed in sanguine rain, by summertime a scarlet stain? Will I be jaded to a hue of navy blue, will foray turn beige? But I gave chase and prayed.
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Nov 20, 2021
Nov 20, 2021 at 2:33 PM UTC
Sway (2nd draft)
Adjacent places in space, alternating waves and fluctuating states encased in ancient clay taking vague shape creates and unmakes its own paper maché face; portrayed, gave name, draped- vagrant flame ablaze, nascent and awake. Into the fray, blades flaying flesh agape, my skin scraped, nothing safe; I must leave no trace and base no faith in erased slate; afraid, higher stakes played, will I pay? No way to relate, what could I ever say to convey? Earth quakes cities vacated and razed as heavenly body vibrates reasserting reign; tectonic plates break, fissures snake, aimless traipsing fingertips; hastily laid basement's pavement caves in, labyrinthine maze of narrow, harrowed straits dig my grave. No escape from this cage, I pace- my weight betrayed limping and lame, graceless skating figure eights pirouette rotate as frame decays to waste, body aches with age and dismay, lines tracing pain I await the day and for whose sake? Chaste, craving a naked embrace to kiss on the nape, just a taste could stave or slake; gazes trade- sudden sun rays, through clouds grey laced, my eyes dilate, invading the gates of my brain. Breath bated, taken away; fates interlaced or am i only swayed astray by another wraith that will fade into shade? Emaciated, to be slain by my own starvation and hunger pangs? Will circle of veins be exanguinated, drained as seedling baby daisies' chains are spewed and scattered into May in springtime bathed in sanguine rain, by summertime a scarlet stain? Will I be jaded to a hue of navy blue, will foray turn beige? But I gave chase and prayed.
This is another one I'm unsure if I prefer the first or second version. Probably the other version since it's more concise, just figured I'd put this one out there anyway since there were some parts I did like (might even just rework/rewrite it later, who knows)
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Nov 20, 2021
Nov 20, 2021 at 2:33 PM UTC
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