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She took my niece, Made her, her-daughter. Two of them sippin' coffee In yoga clothes, Watching sun-rising over the bay @ 7:00am, on a Sabbath-Saturday. She took my niece, Made her, her-daughter. Life, a puzzle, a jig saw dance, Just found, right now, the right spot, As I espied them, this poem, Product of a momentary glance. Another poem, another piece, When, She took my niece, Made her into Her-Daughter. 7:02am August 24th 2013
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Aug 24, 2013
Aug 24, 2013 at 7:04 AM UTC
She took my niece
She took my niece, Made her, her-daughter. Two of them sippin' coffee In yoga clothes, Watching sun-rising over the bay @ 7:00am, on a Sabbath-Saturday. She took my niece, Made her, her-daughter. Life, a puzzle, a jig saw dance, Just found, right now, the right spot, As I espied them, this poem, Product of a momentary glance. Another poem, another piece, When, She took my niece, Made her into Her-Daughter. 7:02am August 24th 2013
In actuality, I wooed my woman early on, fifth date perhaps, when I took them both to dinner, knowing full well, tween them would be, love at first sight, "spoke not a word" that night, cause I knew, It was me who was getting lucky. Women, so easy to read.
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99/M/NYC/Lippstadt/Kraków
Aug 24, 2013
Aug 24, 2013 at 7:04 AM UTC
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