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The brilliant spring sun, Lends a sunshine to shadows, And sweeps away dusk.
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Oct 19, 2021
Oct 19, 2021 at 12:37 PM UTC
The Spring Sun
The brilliant spring sun, Lends a sunshine to shadows, And sweeps away dusk.
My first haiku. I tried to write a haiku before only to give up, thinking it's too hard. But here it is, although it's not so great. I'd be grateful to get some feedback cz I'm not sure bout the 2nd line - "lends a sunshine"
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Oct 19, 2021
Oct 19, 2021 at 12:37 PM UTC
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