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the ravages of time have gnawed at the stone wall dividing car park and garden creating small crevasses                         those now give shelter to small beings                                  like the snail that is grateful to hide                                                 it has found its way                                                         into the depths of the wall         unnoticed by predators                              considering it a tasty meal and                 uncrushed by careless hurried feet that frequently are oblivious to the path underneath many a snail has thus passed away this one however has found a transient refuge its only predator now is time for soon it must choose and either come out and face the perils of life or starve hiding in the wall (You will never know if you lay low) © Jasmine, Bude, July 2010
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Aug 19, 2013
Aug 19, 2013 at 9:14 AM UTC
The Snail in the Wall
the ravages of time have gnawed at the stone wall dividing car park and garden creating small crevasses                         those now give shelter to small beings                                  like the snail that is grateful to hide                                                 it has found its way                                                         into the depths of the wall         unnoticed by predators                              considering it a tasty meal and                 uncrushed by careless hurried feet that frequently are oblivious to the path underneath many a snail has thus passed away this one however has found a transient refuge its only predator now is time for soon it must choose and either come out and face the perils of life or starve hiding in the wall (You will never know if you lay low) © Jasmine, Bude, July 2010
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Aug 19, 2013
Aug 19, 2013 at 9:14 AM UTC
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