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I wanted to impress you... but I am afraid I have failed I wanted to impress you so I shaved my face, letting you know that I am proud of every young wrinkle and of every scar that I once hid. I wanted to impress you so I wore a shirt with buttons to show you getting my shirt off takes more work than just a slip of the hands. I wanted to impress you so I wrote a poem with 17 words that have more than ten letters in them to show you I am smarter than those other boys. I wanted to impress you so signed myself up to read my words to a group of strangers putting my own pride on the line to show you there are more important things to me. I wanted to impress you so I walked 3 inches taller with my shoulders back and my waist cocked tightly behind to show you I don't care that the world can see my whole face. I wanted to impress you... until I found out that the only person that you are impressed by is none other than your self. so now I repress you and your words and your day to day verbs to show you that I am not impressed by you.
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Jul 9, 2010
Jul 9, 2010 at 5:25 PM UTC
I wanted to Impress you
I wanted to impress you... but I am afraid I have failed I wanted to impress you so I shaved my face, letting you know that I am proud of every young wrinkle and of every scar that I once hid. I wanted to impress you so I wore a shirt with buttons to show you getting my shirt off takes more work than just a slip of the hands. I wanted to impress you so I wrote a poem with 17 words that have more than ten letters in them to show you I am smarter than those other boys. I wanted to impress you so signed myself up to read my words to a group of strangers putting my own pride on the line to show you there are more important things to me. I wanted to impress you so I walked 3 inches taller with my shoulders back and my waist cocked tightly behind to show you I don't care that the world can see my whole face. I wanted to impress you... until I found out that the only person that you are impressed by is none other than your self. so now I repress you and your words and your day to day verbs to show you that I am not impressed by you.
Written By Matthew Cuellar
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Jul 9, 2010
Jul 9, 2010 at 5:25 PM UTC
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