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being held under was a gift experience test game i took it seriously i created endlessly mercilessly without realizing because that's what you do when you get held under you find a way to breathe but mine was temporary and the water is rising and there is no way to breathe i wasted it my resources now my cries for air are not seen as a cry for help they are for attention the spotlight because drowning is the same as bursting forth from the water
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Aug 12, 2013
Aug 12, 2013 at 1:39 AM UTC
i wanted you to validate my drowning
being held under was a gift experience test game i took it seriously i created endlessly mercilessly without realizing because that's what you do when you get held under you find a way to breathe but mine was temporary and the water is rising and there is no way to breathe i wasted it my resources now my cries for air are not seen as a cry for help they are for attention the spotlight because drowning is the same as bursting forth from the water
yes this poem is cliche as all hell but it is a very good way to sum up my experiences with a lot of stuff okay thanks
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Aug 12, 2013
Aug 12, 2013 at 1:39 AM UTC
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