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I viewed our pictures, Our visual memories, And felt the chill On the back of my knees, of that cold winter morning, Where the dorms were cold, and classes cancelled, and we walked out in the snow, near knee deep, and photographed the children playing. Where we ran into Snowstorm, Shivering in his sweatpants, While doing the same as we. So we drank our whiskey, warmed by our hot apple cider, and hot cocoa with schnapps, While you viewed my photos, Telling me, “they’re your best you’ve done, I love you, I’m cold, let’s warm up Like lovers do, On winter nights.” And convinced each other We’d be the ones to hold 
One another tight when Our lives ever got out of hand, To this cold again, Together. And with lights fading, And buzzes deflating, At last you told me, Those pictures weren’t As good as I meant them to be.
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Aug 11, 2013
Aug 11, 2013 at 2:27 AM UTC
SnowStorm
I viewed our pictures, Our visual memories, And felt the chill On the back of my knees, of that cold winter morning, Where the dorms were cold, and classes cancelled, and we walked out in the snow, near knee deep, and photographed the children playing. Where we ran into Snowstorm, Shivering in his sweatpants, While doing the same as we. So we drank our whiskey, warmed by our hot apple cider, and hot cocoa with schnapps, While you viewed my photos, Telling me, “they’re your best you’ve done, I love you, I’m cold, let’s warm up Like lovers do, On winter nights.” And convinced each other We’d be the ones to hold 
One another tight when Our lives ever got out of hand, To this cold again, Together. And with lights fading, And buzzes deflating, At last you told me, Those pictures weren’t As good as I meant them to be.
Pictures are powerful things, and sometimes the 1,000 words they hold can form themselves into their own story.
justin-surgent
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Aug 11, 2013
Aug 11, 2013 at 2:27 AM UTC
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