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She always taps the railings when she walks along the street No matter the weather, her mood, if she’s early or late It goes tap, tap step tap, step tap tap, and repeat. It’s a simple and quiet lived life to the beat Of her fears, her obsessively organized fate She always taps the railings when she walks down the street. It helps her feel calm; to tap makes the walk neat, Step twice near the fountain and jump over the grate It goes tap, tap step tap, step tap tap and repeat. Do her neighbors peek, do they point, do they bleat About the girl who’s got rhythm tied into her fate? She always taps the railings when she walks down the street. And her parents, do they not fear for her feet And her tapping obsession, psychiatrist’s bait It goes tap, tap step tap, step tap tap and repeat. But it’s hers, her own comforting lullaby sweet It protects her from bombs, famine and food past it’s due-date So she always taps the railings when she walks down the street. She goes tap. Tap step tap. Step tap tap. And repeat.
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Aug 7, 2013
Aug 7, 2013 at 10:34 PM UTC
The Rhythmic Villanelle
She always taps the railings when she walks along the street No matter the weather, her mood, if she’s early or late It goes tap, tap step tap, step tap tap, and repeat. It’s a simple and quiet lived life to the beat Of her fears, her obsessively organized fate She always taps the railings when she walks down the street. It helps her feel calm; to tap makes the walk neat, Step twice near the fountain and jump over the grate It goes tap, tap step tap, step tap tap and repeat. Do her neighbors peek, do they point, do they bleat About the girl who’s got rhythm tied into her fate? She always taps the railings when she walks down the street. And her parents, do they not fear for her feet And her tapping obsession, psychiatrist’s bait It goes tap, tap step tap, step tap tap and repeat. But it’s hers, her own comforting lullaby sweet It protects her from bombs, famine and food past it’s due-date So she always taps the railings when she walks down the street. She goes tap. Tap step tap. Step tap tap. And repeat.
I have an email subscription that sends me writing ideas, and they sent me the format for a poem type called the villanelle, and after having recently watched a documentary about obsessive compulsive disorders, this poem was born.
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Aug 7, 2013
Aug 7, 2013 at 10:34 PM UTC
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