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Daisy, in a field of weeds,     What have you come to see?     You hide all of your beauty,     Like a bare wintered tree.              Scared to stand alone,     So you blend with your surrounds;     When you never speak a word,     I still love the way you sound.              Daisy, in a field of weeds,     Give me one chance to show;     That I can nurture you without risk,     Of allowing these weeds to grow.                  Soon you will tower,     and these weeds will begin to shrink;     I give unto you this water,     My dearest Daisy, why won’t you drink.              Daisy, in a field of weeds,     I know it’s hard to see your worth;     But to me, my dearest Daisy,     You bring such beauty to this earth.              Daisy, through these battles, you feel alone,    These weeds take more than they give;     Please, Daisy, just give me one chance,     I’ll stand beside you til the end.
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May 28, 2021
May 28, 2021 at 1:45 PM UTC
“Daisy, in a Field of Weeds”
Daisy, in a field of weeds,     What have you come to see?     You hide all of your beauty,     Like a bare wintered tree.              Scared to stand alone,     So you blend with your surrounds;     When you never speak a word,     I still love the way you sound.              Daisy, in a field of weeds,     Give me one chance to show;     That I can nurture you without risk,     Of allowing these weeds to grow.                  Soon you will tower,     and these weeds will begin to shrink;     I give unto you this water,     My dearest Daisy, why won’t you drink.              Daisy, in a field of weeds,     I know it’s hard to see your worth;     But to me, my dearest Daisy,     You bring such beauty to this earth.              Daisy, through these battles, you feel alone,    These weeds take more than they give;     Please, Daisy, just give me one chance,     I’ll stand beside you til the end.
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27/M/Dallas-Fort Worth
May 28, 2021
May 28, 2021 at 1:45 PM UTC
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