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somber song haiku /|\ *early autumn chill somber toning frogling bass stars beam silent truth* \|/ mid summer hints its end here too the night extends in tones lamenting twilit choke of day-- changeling-hours' ease: a memory offsetting later dawns yet deeper chills portend an autumn's coming tide of ending-songs i too am passing as a haiku's universal scope of timeless time, galactic spin within the frogling's utterance, makes morbid rhythms eyed; i fear i'm croaking right along this somber bass, and wonder is it time? so soon? envisioning the ancient host of haiku masters brittle, fade in unison of tears or tranquil noddings at the season's cutting partial circles round the sun i read i am the aging frog by virtue of a poem, and then it lets me leap! .
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Aug 10, 2013
Aug 10, 2013 at 2:42 PM UTC
after reading 'somber song haiku' by Mae
somber song haiku /|\ *early autumn chill somber toning frogling bass stars beam silent truth* \|/ mid summer hints its end here too the night extends in tones lamenting twilit choke of day-- changeling-hours' ease: a memory offsetting later dawns yet deeper chills portend an autumn's coming tide of ending-songs i too am passing as a haiku's universal scope of timeless time, galactic spin within the frogling's utterance, makes morbid rhythms eyed; i fear i'm croaking right along this somber bass, and wonder is it time? so soon? envisioning the ancient host of haiku masters brittle, fade in unison of tears or tranquil noddings at the season's cutting partial circles round the sun i read i am the aging frog by virtue of a poem, and then it lets me leap! .
thanks to indelible Mae for her generosity of craft, wisdom, beauty --and for allowing me to include her poem here! you are an inspiration :) http://hellopoetry.com/poem/somber-song-haiku/
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Aug 10, 2013 at 2:42 PM UTC
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